Let's try. I have done my very best work on this assignment.
I have written a few argumentative essays before, and I have a good grasp on logical structures and how to correctly validate and invalidate claims. There are a lot of things to take into account and I know I am not great with all of them. I have good verified sources and I try to quote from them whenever I'm making any sort of claim. Overall I think I did alright.
However, this isn't a normal argumentative essay. This is a rhetorical analysis, which I completely misunderstood the first few weeks of writing. Thanks to Dr. Kyburz, I have actually gone back and included some rhetorical analysis but before that my paper would've gotten a 70% at best, I'm sure! So yeah, thank God she showed me I was going about it wrong before the due date, otherwise I would be in quite a problem. However I haven't been good at incorporating opinions and mixing them with sources, ever. My brain likes to stick either on the far left with opinions or the far right with sources, there is no middle ground- which makes this paper worrying to me. Overall, I think it will be okay, but it is nowhere near as perfect as I would want it.
